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1. too many sliders - should only have 1 not 3 and extras
2. needs to change to 2021(bottom right)
3. our promise: whats "extra?"

now lets jump to the english(presuming he is not native english speaker)...
firslty hard to capture/read with all the damn sliders and changers, but:
1. We have been helping to produce HIGH-QUALITY conversion of your designs to HTML
- bad english - needs rewording
2. We create awesome design and focused on delivering high-class HTML/CSS markup
- We create awesome designs and we are focused on delivering high-class HTML/CSS markup
3. We will review your design and requirements then We will send you project final quote with ETA
- We will review your design and requirements, then we will send you a final quote.
4. actually all of them around that green circle thing have errors. dont know why he is capitalising the W in We every time too.
5. "what clients says" needs to be changed to "what clients say"(not extra S) or "client reviews"
okay theres alot of english errors that he needs to fix. couldnt be bothered going through all of them sorry.
the layout is alright though, just stop those sliders!
 
1. too many sliders - should only have 1 not 3 and extras
2. needs to change to 2021(bottom right)
3. our promise: whats "extra?"

now lets jump to the english(presuming he is not native english speaker)...
firslty hard to capture/read with all the damn sliders and changers, but:
1. We have been helping to produce HIGH-QUALITY conversion of your designs to HTML
- bad english - needs rewording
2. We create awesome design and focused on delivering high-class HTML/CSS markup
- We create awesome designs and we are focused on delivering high-class HTML/CSS markup
3. We will review your design and requirements then We will send you project final quote with ETA
- We will review your design and requirements, then we will send you a final quote.
4. actually all of them around that green circle thing have errors. dont know why he is capitalising the W in We every time too.
5. "what clients says" needs to be changed to "what clients say"(not extra S) or "client reviews"
okay theres alot of english errors that he needs to fix. couldnt be bothered going through all of them sorry.
the layout is alright though, just stop those sliders!
Thank you for your valuable feedback. I will share your message to my friend.
 
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