My Second Atttempt In Hosting Template

[BJ@008]

Hi,

I am working on another hosting template which I'll be using on my site or might sell (yet to decide). I have finished the basic thing and would like to know what things I could do to make it better.

Link to album with every page screenshot:

http://imgur.com/a/hl8qq#0

I hope you'll help in making this better.

Regards

 

[Rox]

This looks far better than the previous one, keep up the good work (y)

 

[VenomServers]

Looks very good, I like your design

 

[BSafe]

great..<3
I think the top image is a bit large.

 

[nubljad]

looks great (y) i think also that top image is a bit too large

 

[mRAza]

Good try but here are A few suggestions To improve:
1. Improve your typography skills.
2. use proper text or at least lerm ispum dummy text to get original feelings of design.
3. http://imgur.com/a/hl8qq#1 color very sharp to eyes and page looks dul, compe up with better color scheme.
4.increase footer length and add stuff like newsletter, update links etc

 

[BJ@008]

@mRAza thanks for guidance and I'll surely make changes you have suggested.

Btw I have made many changes to the template and it is sitting live @ http://aheadcloud.com .

I'll make more changes and try to make it better in next few days.If you have any other suggest please let met know so that I can include them in next template update.