Feedback on my new banner

[GoliathEdit]

Hey everyone,
I made this banner for my channel and just looking for some feedback on it, its the first one i've done at this style.

Just tell me what you think of it and what could be improved.

Thanks!
Goliath

 

[BJ@008]

Banner looks good (y)

just a little suggestion you should do some edit to make text to stand out of the background bit more.To me it looks like it blends too much with bg.

Or maybe it just me. Hope other gfx people can point you better

 

[pi0tr3k]

Looks really cool dude! :D

 

[Ashleyuk1984]

Took me a few seconds to realize what the text said... This is probably a bad thing. Apart from that, looks pretty cool.

 

[sohom]

how much tym it tks to make it out? @OP

 

[dljawed]

well dude your works shows your identity!
thats called hard work!
10/10 +1

 

[BJ@008]

Indeed the banner is really nice.

I am also wondering how much time it took for OP to design this one.

 

[GoliathEdit]

Well because I was just experimenting with the new style it took maybe 30 - 45 minutes in cinema 4d then maybe 15 - 20 minutes in Photoshop

 

[alothamy]

Nice
I liked

 

[NEMISIES]

I like it... could not make it out at first either.

expand evrything behind the text would look better me thinks

And with Different font.. I dont think it suits it.. maybe the color putin me off..

PS: Work on the swirls too..