Rabbit & the turtle- New Version Story
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It is actually good story, but it will be much better this way:
3# The turtle won the race because the rabbit couldn't cross the river, so he decided to ask for another race on the same route.
4# The turtle accepted, and when she arrived to the river she found the rabbit waiting for her, he then jumped on her and crossed the river on her back, when they arrived to the other side the rabbit jumped and ran to the finish line. yelling Problem turtle ? [trollface]
5# The turtle get mad and asked for another round on the same path, the troll rabbit accepted and jumped on her from the beginning of the race this time enjoying the free ride to and across the river, but when the turtle get to the river, she dived deeply in the water and the rabbit sank and go [ffuu]
* THE END *
3# The turtle won the race because the rabbit couldn't cross the river, so he decided to ask for another race on the same route.
4# The turtle accepted, and when she arrived to the river she found the rabbit waiting for her, he then jumped on her and crossed the river on her back, when they arrived to the other side the rabbit jumped and ran to the finish line. yelling Problem turtle ? [trollface]
5# The turtle get mad and asked for another round on the same path, the troll rabbit accepted and jumped on her from the beginning of the race this time enjoying the free ride to and across the river, but when the turtle get to the river, she dived deeply in the water and the rabbit sank and go [ffuu]
* THE END *
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