First site layout - Good or bad for a 1st timer?

[vps9Ryan]

Hello guys,

Im trying to build a portfolio of my work. This is my first ever from the "top-down" website layout in PSD.

Please let me know what you think for a first timer :P

[slide]http://i.imgur.com/IjyrM.png[/slide]​

I appreciate it,
regards,
Ryan

 

[Jesse]

I can hardly see the actual layout due to watermarking. That watermark just fucks with my eyes.

Its a dark web hosting template. That is about as unprofessional as it can come (in my eyes though) if a web host actually used it. Black is just terrible for a background.

I like the overall flow though of the layout. Maybe make the width a bit more for the plans so there is not as much empty space. Lighten up the background and have everything blend into it. more.

 

[DoggY DoG]

yeah please remove the watermark or put a little watermark so that it can easily view by members.

 

[CyberAff]

well if "Lifetalk" going to open service called "LulzServer" or "LulzDedi" or atleast "LulzHosting" he can use this theme it suits him

example: www.lulzimg.com xD same as your skin + fonts haha

anyways kool

 

[Tango]

It looks like the background would look good Blue shade.

If the theme was 'Dark Hosting' it went wrong somewhere.

 

[Rambo]

Good For a first timer I guess :P
Cant see it properly :S :S
Change the FONTS
Good Luck

 

[FSL]

well if "Lifetalk" going to open service called "LulzServer" or "LulzDedi" or atleast "LulzHosting" he can use this theme it suits him

example: www.lulzimg.com xD same as your skin haha

anyways kool

haha lol....

Nice design BTW.. Unique*

 

[akazai_khan]

The reason behind Dark Color might be your Brand name? "Dark Hosting"? and

• why not you use single wrapper to hold all objects, rather "Header, Plans, Content and Footer
• in Header: why not you take logo up, and navigation under it
• Quick Telephone/Email is important, as Support really matters in hosting business, so you can have space at right side for menu
• There are too many round templates, and in my personal view they are out of fashion, why not you make them square and play with borders?

Inspiration:-
http://themedemo.indonez.com/Epsilon/hosting/

 

[vps9Ryan]

Cheers guys

Thanks for this :D

regards,
Ryan

 

[Jesse]

Aside from the thread. Do you still do hosting, Ryan? Your hosting was the cats pajamas

 

[ENC0DE]

Fix the Font!

 

[sSKKa]

nice theme just change fonts

 

[vps9Ryan]

Aside from the thread. Do you still do hosting, Ryan? Your hosting was the cats pajamas

haha, i have sold vps9 to cover debts, however - i have joined motionite and we are offering descent offshore services with quality

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Thanks for your comments guys, I will see what I can do.

regards,
Ryan