First Photo Manipulation (Thoughts?)

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Well, it isn't much but i have decided that it is enough and good enough for my first, you might think otherwise but that's why i have made this thread.

What inspired me to do this??
MrOSX - He is the reason i decided to try it.
His thread here: http://www.wjunction.com/151-graphi...to-manipulation-thoughts.html?highlight=manip

Questions i have for you:
Where could i of done things differently?
What else could i of added?
How good is the lighting?

Here is my version:
1lZ97MH.jpg


Here is the original image:
fnHr2nF.jpg


Not alot of work, i know that but manipulations don't have t be right??
 
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Everything looks great, except this : http://i.imgur.com/mMY3Xea.png. I don't know if i see it in a wrong manner, but he's a guy standing and looking at the ground, right ? not sure about that one, as its not clear enough.


On the other hand, i'd have loved to see a lot more elements. The sky could have been changed, you could have added a morning sun or anything for that matter.

You're doing it great, if its the first time. The lake, the parachute and the tower looks real (y) .
 
Everything looks great, except this : http://i.imgur.com/mMY3Xea.png. I don't know if i see it in a wrong manner, but he's a guy standing and looking at the ground, right ? not sure about that one, as its not clear enough.


On the other hand, i'd have loved to see a lot more elements. The sky could have been changed, you could have added a morning sun or anything for that matter.

You're doing it great, if its the first time. The lake, the parachute and the tower looks real (y) .
I see it as he is looking through binoculars? Maybe just me though haha.
Yeah, i was thinking of adding the morning sun but i thought for my first i would just put it up and get a little feedback.
I appreciate every single thing you just said to me, thanks and i will give my second one more time and thought, will record them also.
Watch myself improve over time eventually :)
 
Manipulation looks great! The only thing is i'm not sure about the Eiffel tower, looks a little out of place (not only because its in mountains haha). But great job :)
 
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