Alright, 3rd time lucky?

[Henry]

I have been playing with a few different ideas over the past few weeks in my free time. I thought, once again, I'd check in and see what you guys think.

Let me know if you think it sucks.... again :P !!

http://i.imgur.com/vcKUrK5.jpg

Thanks
H

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Added after 4 Hours 50 minutes:

I have slightly modified it - will post any updates

http://i.imgur.com/vAVlX0r.jpg

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Added after 2 Hours 9 minutes:

Updated again http://i.imgur.com/lzUUqkM.jpg